---I used to be better at writing poems, but this is my latest attempt at trying to get back into it. I'm not sure if it's any good, but it means a lot to me and represents my life quite a bit. I hope it's okay though too. I'm always ready to improve.---
One bound in the light
One bound in the dark
Separate to live each life
Forever split, forever apart
Plains dissolve and divide
The ending of this, the ending of all
Cries never stop, the end is nigh
Is this me? Is this my call?
Torment collected, they see me suffer
Two sides lie within, neither surrender
What am I? I am rent, torn asunder
Sounds plague me, like thunder
Everything falls, everything collapses
No more dark, no more light
It all turns to ashes
It's always a fight
This will never cease
I am meant to craze
Why can't it be? Why not release?
I am broken, I am aged
Intensity rises, never declining
Mind lost to insanity long since days past
Eternity seems to haunt me, soul battered and relying
On something I forget, fast
Something ethereal, something unknown
Knowledge lost to time, buried in depth
I am nothing, yet I fear being alone
This is my last, this is my death
Click for my blog | Click for my first poem: "They Drag Me Under" | Click for my second poem: "Scattered Fear" | Click for my third poem: "Broken in Two" | Click for my GFX threadSpiral -by- Godsmack -- Sometimes we only live for the here and now. Sometimes we're lonely. Sometimes we feel we need a place to be grounded... or fly away again. I will fly away again. I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away. Live again. Here forever. The spiral never ends. Why are we feeling something's familiar around us? Are we just dreaming? Always we search for the answers but nothing is found. We fly away again. I will fly away again.
I am loving the angst and the lack of structure here, two traits that absolutely compliment one another. The quick pace also helps in getting your point across as well.
Kudos on the poem overall, I can relate.
Thanks. ^_^ It means a lot to have someone else like it too.
Thanks, to you for sharing Also really take into mind the compliments I gave you, they are good qualities to have.
You're welcome for sharing ^_^ But at least something comes out of that duo that you mentioned, that's a relief. It's good for something at least. ^_^
I thought it was nicely done, a certain flow to it that one can follow. Genuine soul food
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